Orrin Konheim
1 min readApr 1, 2024

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It's not a bad article to start off with.

My advice is:

1. Don't waste audience attention with things people already know. Assume your audience knows the basics of what April Fools Day is and work that into the text, or be self-conscious about it. (i.e. for those that don't know)

2. When you transitioned in one paragraph from the US tradition to the French tradition, there wasn't a proper thru-line to take us back to the US Tradition

3. I would go more into the veracity of the theories (how reliable they are) and if there's anything we can say for certain about the holiday. I have no doubt that it was documented in media somewhere.

4. I applaud you for a relatively strong conclusion and a relatively strong introduction. Too many Medium writers state what they want to write about.

5. I would still tie the history of the holiday, in your conclusion. Maybe something like, "If you are the victim of a prank, take pride in the fact that you are upholding a tradition that dates back 600 years"

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Orrin Konheim
Orrin Konheim

Written by Orrin Konheim

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